Although I have not finished creating my video, I presented the film so far to my class in order to gain feedback on elements they like and anything they feel could be improved. Overall, they seemed to enjoy my film and idea however I have gathered the following things need to be improved:
- In the opening sequence when John is walking towards the camera, the camera goes off at an angle at the end. This could be improved by re-filming this section and making it longer. I could do this by filming it out in the street rather than just down the drive.
- I am already planning on adding music behind my finished film however my class picked up on the lack of music and silence in parts such as where he is cleaning his bike.
- There are blank spaces which I am yet to fill in.
- Near the end when John is getting on his bike you can see my shadow and this ruins the shot.
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